Tuesday, 11 June 2013

Falling Trees By Sam

Falling Trees ,chainsaws trying to eat them up.
Chainsaws keep chomping ,chomping, and chomping until the tree falls down.
The trees are not very happy to die.
Chainsaws are very mean to kill the trees.
So people plant the seeds to make new trees.
But the chainsaw still want to kill the trees
little trees are good for bugs when is raining
the bugs can use the little trees like an umbrella.

1 comments:

Unknown said...

I like how you used personification in your story, chainsaws trying to eat them up, that was my favourite part.Will

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