Tuesday, 26 March 2013

Water Slide

Whoosh!One person went!Whoosh another one went!"It's your turn"someone said to me.I slowly slipped in.I could feel the fresh water as cold as an iceberg.I could hear the screams in the distance from the flying kiwi....

Letting go I went as fast as a rocket !
Before I knew it I was at the bottom!"I so want to do that again"! I said to myself.

I was lining up to go on the most fantastically fun water slide in the history of water slides!My advice to you is go to Raukawa Falls!

BY CHLOE

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Whow! Great descriptive writing Chloe.....I really felt I was there.
A. Cherry

Jan Pickett said...

Amazing onomatopoeia - a great hook! You make me want to go back there!

Anonymous said...

Awesome writing Chloe. Keep it up. Mum is very proud of you.

Anonymous said...

well done Chloe we could have been with you it was so exciting Love Granny and Grandpa

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