Tuesday, 26 March 2013

Shinning Raukawa Falls

Shimmering down the steep path rushing rapidly the magnificent waterfall falls down the vertical path.
A huge bit of rock has got chipped off. Imagine hearing that noise.
It sets off large high-pitched screams as the water hits the large lake. I could hear waves crashing against the rocks. I could see shinning pours of water. I could taste disgusting wet air.
As the water hits the surface it also sprays the air with wet air waiting to enter your mouth like a waiting moth to see if it could pounce into your house.

  

1 comments:

Jan Pickett said...

You should be really proud of this writing -some great ideas here! I really like "Imagine hearing that noise.'

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