I can hear the splitter from the roaring waves.
I can see the water glistening in the sunlight.
I can feel the fresh New Zealand water.
The splash of Raukawa Falls is like a World War Two jet plane.
Rock squirting out like a volcano.
By Paris Munro
Room 3 St Johns Hill School
2 comments:
nice work paris good job!
I can see the water glistening in the sunlight.
I can feel the fresh New Zealand water.
...fantastic description!!! I love it!
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