Wednesday, 27 March 2013

Raukawa Falls

Roaring Raukawa Falls trying to be as loud as a tiger.
Water spraying like sparkling diamonds in the mid air.
The trees towering above our heads like giant monsters.
Clay squirting out like a vicious volcano.
by Renee



2 comments:

Room 3 2013 said...

good nice expressive writing

Jan Pickett said...

What great ideas you have - I really like.. "Clay squirting out like a viscous volcano"

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