As I looked about wearily I saw a plastic bag, and shining golden wrappers.
Excitedly I jumped out of bed and ran to my dressing table, I noticed the bag was tied up tight, so I ripped it open and gobbled up an Easter egg.
The delicious chocolate ran down my throat like a wonderful stream of fresh water.
I couldn't wait for the next egg to reach my mouth!
By Katie
By Katie
1 comments:
This story has been well written. There is great vocabulary used and discriptive writing. I'm able to feel the joy that Easter morning gave to you. I would love to read a short story that you might write.
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